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My final goodbyes
My final goodbyes :
One hand on the rope the other holding a pen
One hand tying the knot the other signing my final goodbye's
One foot on the floor on foot on the chair
2 hands holding up the rope 2 feet on the chair
1 man putting the rope round his neck 2 eyes staring into the night
2 eyes staring into the night … 2 eyes staring back?
You wonder and wonder whom they belong to
And before you know it 2 arms grasp your waist
You try to look round but the rope forces you forward
A soft sweet voice from behind whispers in tears "fool"
She keeps whispering that 1 word and you know you're wrong
she unties the knot and looks at you
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I Used To...
I used to love you so much, I used to wake up in the morning and asked myself, "Is he alright?".
I used to care so much about you, I still do, but not in the same way... little by little you started to destroy my feelings towards you, with your atitude, your cheating, your disgrace towards me. You used to be someone alike God for me... how wrong I was...
I used to write love letters for you every morning, and every night, I used to pray for you to answer the phone... and when I saw you every morning my heart beating was so fast I thught I was having a heart attack... but little by little, the pain started to grow, I didn't even knew if our
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insomnia.
and you're the reason
i spend these nights believing
that my heartbeat is
another monster
breathing under the bed and
just something else i
am supposed to fear.
and maybe we're both crazy
but i was never
meant to be like you,
because there are nights when i
speak to the shadows
and call them your name,
as if they are nothing else -
and maybe they aren't.
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haha... interesting... to be honest, i didnt really like it at first, with only the first few verses read but, as it went on and revealed the dark and slightly morbid-ish side it caught my attention very easily... readers get caught with that first glimpse of a deeper meaning... in my opinion, in the begining there probably were a few unnecessary verses but all in all it's a very nice and interesting piece ^^ <3